"über pimpert"
Okay, I ROFLED a bit there at my title and your summary, and then I thought "Wow, this is GREAT! He actually made something as empty as I feel!" Haha, sounds like, a place to think, like we're entering someones mind while they're thinking deeply, you know? Of course you do, you've been there before, everyone has.
I love the calmness this vibes out, it's very, VERY cool. MY suggestion would be to add some stuff into it, maybe mix it up a little bit, with sound effects and such.
But yeah, this is an amazing piece, probably one of your best, it moved me. For cereal.
Peace, love and underpants.
- kylexthexpostman